Night...time is passing by slowly..slowly...the air is oppresive by the minor feelings...they stagnant in the night's heart and wake the sorrow up...they seems not to want to disappear..and my heart is filled with illusion and sobbing...just because the night is too deep...to deserted...
night...the loneliness surrounds me...there were peaceful days but stormy days came then...all of them were too sudden that made my heart not turn in time...and i didnt want to explain anything...
yes, i released all of it so at least i will feel easier, less vexations...less mess, less worriment...
night...tik tak...tik tak...seems rain is falling...in a very far place...i hear a wind blowing cold in the room and another one wandering undeterminedly but doesnt know where to go...i listen to the pain from deep of my memory about past love...unintentionally or not, we let angers burst into broken and unmended hearts...
night...its looking far in the depth of dark, stop at familiar places, trying to find a fragile and temporary moment of happiness...and then hide a drop of tear in hurry...
night...night exposes its naked self to weaknes...wants to hide itself in dreamy sense..to forget everything as nothing happened...but finally it turns back to a big emptiness that seems to be endless...
night...is it long enough for all feeling sobbing in the heart? maybe one night is not enough...but many many nights...
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I'v been checking this site from a while ago ! And here I am registered already ^^! This is absolutely wonderful and full of feelings, I may be in love with your posts.. Creativity comes from simplifying and I agree with you. I'v got a kind of weird question : Could I have the permission to make your poetry as songs ? If its okey I'v made one already -giggles- with the post called FEEL THE RAIN !
Great work Admin, keep it Simple <3 Here you get a regards from Morocco !
Hi Izzy, thank you very much for nice and caring words, i appreciate it ;). Of course, you can use my poetry as songs with credit to me as a writer. And dont forget to give me your works when they finished, i will be pleased to enjoy them . Thank you again for visiting and joining, enjoy your stay here and wish you all the best for every moment in your life. I'd love to see you here more and more. Take care. Greetings from Vietnam
Just want to say what a great blog you got here!I've been around for quite a lot of time, but fiallny decided to show my appreciation of your work!Thumbs up, and keep it going!CheersChristian